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Cassandra_Castagna
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« Reply #30 on: January 11, 2011, 10:31:11 am »

I approve of all of mandabear's poetry <3 Thank you for posting!
And yes, you're poem's good too Novarious. needs a bit of cleaning up in some parts, possibly, but otherwise, good Smiley
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« Reply #31 on: January 12, 2011, 03:48:44 pm »

how do you mean cleaning up exactly?I was unaware that any of it was lude or unclean lol
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« Reply #32 on: January 12, 2011, 05:34:16 pm »

how do you mean cleaning up exactly?I was unaware that any of it was lude or unclean lol


Lol I mean, I dunno. It's different style than mine, so I guess that's what my brain said to type. I make no sense XD
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« Reply #33 on: January 12, 2011, 08:42:41 pm »

how do you mean cleaning up exactly?I was unaware that any of it was lude or unclean lol

She means in terms of spelling, grammar, word choice, meter, etc. Not lewd or unclean. Just a sort of editorial "cleaning up."
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« Reply #34 on: January 12, 2011, 10:18:44 pm »

I write like i think. is anyone scared yet?
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« Reply #35 on: January 12, 2011, 10:25:49 pm »

how do you mean cleaning up exactly?I was unaware that any of it was lude or unclean lol

She means in terms of spelling, grammar, word choice, meter, etc. Not lewd or unclean. Just a sort of editorial "cleaning up."


Kinda... but I didn't want my comments to be taken as insulting because they're not meant to be.
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« Reply #36 on: January 13, 2011, 08:41:15 am »

oh no sweets i would never think to believe you were insulting me. Your my adopted sister and i would never think anything like that of you
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« Reply #37 on: January 19, 2011, 01:52:45 pm »

lol well, thanks <3 I'll definitely be posting more poetry in here asap. been a bit too busy to sit down and write as of late... >.>
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« Reply #38 on: February 11, 2011, 11:12:36 pm »

Lost and alone

She stands on the shore waiting for him to come home
Day and night she stand there alone
For years this has gone on and she has not moved
waiting day and night for her one love, her true
Occasionaly  she will mutter " I did not ask for this."
Then there she stands through heavy rain and autumns mist.
He said he would come home to her; but this he could not know.
she begged him to stay with her and cryed for him not to go.
Alas he only spoke of duty and the land he must defend.
Yet now he is not here and may never be again.
It was not very long after he left.
To him a son was born and now he will never it seems.
Get to hold baby thorn or watch him become the man his father is today.
Thorn will only grow up feeling lost and betrayed.
He is often seen standing behind his mother at the shore.
Armor on,sword in hand and fighting his personal war.
This boy has become a man and now must face his greatest fear.
His father has gone off to war and be home again never more.
His mother hopes, a son accepts and father dies in battle great; but the war is not over here at home.
For those he left behind lost and alone.
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« Reply #39 on: February 13, 2011, 10:21:00 pm »

She speaks of nothing lately
Nothing but her troubles, when you listen
She sees as much of everything
As much as she can possibly take
Because her eyes are busy
With the tears that occupy
She hears all of your troubles
But now she doesn't do as much
Because she feels like you're not in trouble
Or she doesn't care enough
Not anymore
Too much stress, too many hurts
You don't see them
So I'm spoiling it for you now

She creeps on past
She pops out of nowhere with that face
Those eyes
Did you catch the glint?
Then nevermind
Did you see her frown, that tiny hint?
Then leave it alone, if you didn't know
If you do, fix it?
Because she doesn't exactly know how
And she wants you to
But had no words to ask
No will to look weak
Just thinking about it goes against her own rules
Show her the other side



Depressing-ish, sorry :/
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« Reply #40 on: March 06, 2011, 12:18:21 am »

I think of her every night when I sleep
I think of her in the light of day and the dark of night
I try to stop the influx of thoughts; but alas her beauty has made me powerless

I find myself yearning for her warm embrace
I think of her when the cold of this world is to much to take
I find her in my dreams and in my waking days it seems

Before her I was lost, wandering and without a purposde in my life
Now i find myself having a purpose to my life
I must love her protect her and honor with my very life

I must find within me the strength to protect her from those who would do her harm
I must hold her in my heart for she is to big to hold in my arms
I must love her with my soul for that is the only way that matters


She is not a lady, she is not even of this mortal plane
She is the home where I live, the friends i have made and the ones I have yet to make
She and her people have and will shape the man I will be

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« Reply #41 on: March 06, 2011, 12:20:27 am »

(continuing the last post)

She is the lady shadowmoor and I will evermore love her as the lady who gave a home, friends and something worth protecting.

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